nICELY WRITTEN AS ALWAYS. gOOD PIECE OF WORK - MAYBE A LITTLE MORE DETAIL ON ACTROS WOULD PUSH THIS TO AN A. THINK ABOUT DIALOGUE, EXPRESSIONS, FRIENDS ETC. WELL DONE.
nICELY WRITTEN AS ALWAYS. gOOD PIECE OF WORK - MAYBE A LITTLE MORE DETAIL ON ACTROS WOULD PUSH THIS TO AN A. THINK ABOUT DIALOGUE, EXPRESSIONS, FRIENDS ETC. WELL DONE.
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